Sunday, July 14, 2013

blog 2

when i was writing my paper about immigration , what in wanted most was to write the paper well and be able to make the reader understand what i was tring to convince the audiance of was that
the steroetyping of immigrants was not right and that they should think it more truely
 using some facts on the way and many of my opions

2 comments:

  1. You should express more feelings, girlfriend! I would love to hear more about what you have to say about the feedback and what the actually feedback was!? What did your group say? SPEAK MORE BABE, I WANT TO HEAR WHAT YOUR BEAUTIFUL MIND HAS TO SAY <3 :)

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